...Singapore and they remained stable profits - they Spelling - bottomed, equipment, demonstrate, furniture (no 's'), that, kitchen More detail needed in the first part of the table description. Why are you describing only three aspects? Why does the dirty pantry lead to a decrease in working efficiency? dissatisfied / unsatisfactory
1. Findings
Figure 1 illustrates the Profits trends of Mojo in its two markets, Hong Kong and Singapore during the 1990s.
1.1 Singapore
In the first two years, there was a consistent growth in profits in Singapore and remained stable at $50 milliion in 1996. However, the profit declined steadily from 1996 and reached $10 million in 2001. One reason for the rise was that the open market of mainland China. For the decline, it is apparent that the financial crisis had a negative impact to the profits of Singapore.
1.2 Hong Kong
In contrast, profits in Hong Kong climbed gradually and reached the peak in 1997 at $60 million. Then, it dropped sharply and levelled off at $30 million in 1998. It bottemed out at 1999 and improved significantly towards the end of the decade.
A possible explanation for the increase is the pre handover boom in Hong Kong. The further decline may be attributed to the post handover depression. The rise from 1998 could have been because of the growth of China market.
2. Table
The table presents the findings of a survey carried out by an insurance company into working conditions at its head office in Central.
2.1 Equipment
The findings show around a quarter of the junior level staff compared to seven in ten of the senior staff were satisfied with equipemnt. The reason for this is that the computers are using old software. A result of this is that the junior staff will work slowly and inefficiently.
2.2 Office Furniture
The findings demostrate that nearly half of the junior staff compared to three-quarters of senior staff were satisfied with office furniture. It appears that the furnitures are old and uncomfortable. The effect of this might be affecting their health and more staff will ask for sick leave.
2.3 Pantry
The findings indicate taht nearly half of both junior staff and senior staff were unsatisfied with the pantry. It is evident that the small kichen is dirty and there is only one microwave. This can lead to the decrease in working efficiency.
...Singapore and they remained stable
profits - they
Spelling - bottomed, equipment, demonstrate, furniture (no 's'), that, kitchen
More detail needed in the first part of the table description. Why are you describing only three aspects?
Why does the dirty pantry lead to a decrease in working efficiency?
dissatisfied / unsatisfactory
1. Findings
Figure 1 illustrates the Profits trends of Mojo in its two markets, Hong Kong and Singapore during the 1990s.
1.1 Singapore
In the first two years, there was a consistent growth in profits in Singapore and remained stable at $50 milliion in 1996. However, the profit declined steadily from 1996 and reached $10 million in 2001. One reason for the rise was that the open market of mainland China. For the decline, it is apparent that the financial crisis had a negative impact to the profits of Singapore.
1.2 Hong Kong
In contrast, profits in Hong Kong climbed gradually and reached the peak in 1997 at $60 million. Then, it dropped sharply and levelled off at $30 million in 1998. It bottemed out at 1999 and improved significantly towards the end of the decade.
A possible explanation for the increase is the pre handover boom in Hong Kong. The further decline may be attributed to the post handover depression. The rise from 1998 could have been because of the growth of China market.
2. Table
The table presents the findings of a survey carried out by an insurance company into working conditions at its head office in Central.
2.1 Equipment
The findings show around a quarter of the junior level staff compared to seven in ten of the senior staff were satisfied with equipemnt. The reason for this is that the computers are using old software. A result of this is that the junior staff will work slowly and inefficiently.
2.2 Office Furniture
The findings demostrate that nearly half of the junior staff compared to three-quarters of senior staff were satisfied with office furniture. It appears that the furnitures are old and uncomfortable. The effect of this might be affecting their health and more staff will ask for sick leave.
2.3 Pantry
The findings indicate taht nearly half of both junior staff and senior staff were unsatisfied with the pantry. It is evident that the small kichen is dirty and there is only one microwave. This can lead to the decrease in working efficiency.